Behind That Wall

By your side, a little to the back, down the hall

Just behind that wall.

 

Watching you,

 

Loving you,

 

Standing with my mouth a little open in awe,

 

Just outside of your inner bright light,

 

Giving you strength,

from thirteen yards away.

Reviews

[Otsana]

This poem reminds me how you don't need to be with someone to be giving them the strength and support they need. Very simple but it works nicely. Nice work!

[Aristede Craig Jr]

lovely

[Me]

A great write ! I enjoyed every bit of it !

[Leslie Philibert]

A really good poem,for reasons I can`t explain I love it.Maybe the enigmatic imagery, or the lyrical simplicity.Good literature.

[Larry Dyson]

oh ...what a submissive adoration..wonderful!