Far Better than the Nightmares

Dying at the gates of Hell

glimpses of decaying flesh

fire and steam licking my skin away

 

The ground only a bit past breaking

falling through time, through mistakes we've all made

A window in a hole to a fair maiden's just as fair dream

and the knowlege that you gave up on many years past Heaven.

Reviews

[Jeremy Baker]

I enjoyed reading this!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Like a dark read at night
perfectly written...
well enjoyed :)

[Chris]

If innocence has intent...

"Goodness" is just sooooooooo quiet... Bad seems to rock - to be DOING something and doing is better than waiting... always waiting while everyone else is having ...fun and being more than I am. Being Bad is exciting.

There is a price for being as we are... someone pays the piper - always.

[Asb]

dark and a good ending :)