Life-Air.....A Girl

I'll be a wonder,

another world class wonder.

 

I'll stand on the ship and break way my hand

to the air from my lips

in my goodbye kiss

 

Singing my thoughts on repeat in my skull

taking time for the glimpse of an Adam's fall

 

Hearing in the background, a poor child's flight

"don't know your name,

won't play your game!"

No, no, it's not your day.

 

Reviews

[Nobody.]

:)

I like the voice in this. so determined. driven.

interesting piece. I enjoyed.

Cheers!

[dukovan]

The idea of repeating occurrences of the world around you. As if everyone is just replicated each other on different scales, and in different variations. I guess that's just art though, and you captured that nicely.

[Chris]

I came back... and paused again

[Chris]

There's a lot within this...
so little is ever simple.

[Kaylor Mason]

This is cool, though a little hard to understand and absorb. The flow of the words is good, just like a ship on the waves.