I'll Write You a Smile

And paint your eyes crystal clear.

I'll give you my hand to hold instead of a bottle.
 
You can have my future if you don't want your own,
   I'll make you a family if you hold me tight.
You can take my bad mistakes if I can have your bad thoughts.

I'll paint a picture we can melt into together-- the real world can disappear.

We'll have our own corner, in some dark forgotten place.
The two of us forever, cocooned together in love. 

Reviews

[Invisible]

sounds like an interesting plan, we all need a light to heal our darkness.

[nigrum homonculus]

i love the honesty in your words in this. brings out the emotion more. your wordplay was sick. i applaud you. well done.

[Craig2591]

Very, very nice! I don't have a favorite line because they're all so good!

[Lina Grey]

How sweet! The sincerity and wistful love in this are quite evident. I like how the title was also a part of the poem.
"I'll paint a picture we can melt into together"
my favorite line^^
Thank you.

[Chris]

Giving quite a bit to share your path!

A lot of heart.