Ghost

A lot of the time, I feel as if I dont belong with other humans. like Im in contsant limbo...

Silhouettes of memories,

Shadows of the past

Everything is foggy now

Where did I go last?

Hovering and whispering

Equilibrium blistering

Crooked teeth                grinding

What was I finding?

Moving through this blank state

Nothing is becoming clear

I cant remember anything

Im scared but feel no fear.

 

Reviews

[Dillon Cotter]

gives a creepy like vibe but its mysterious and nice. good job.

[Jason]

"I'm scared but feel no fear"....such a beautiful line that captures both sides of the coin, so to speak. I really like the way you portray yourself as the ghost here....very eerie and deep. :)

[Christopher Kneipp]

Really like this poem Placenta. A very worthy offering. Keep writing