Did it hurt..?!

Him: "Did it hurt...?"

Her: "Did what hurt...?

Him: "When you fell from Heaven..."

Her: "Aww Kevin..."

Him: "Because your face is really f****d up......"

Her: "Umm, that wasn't funny..."

Him: "Sorry honey" :-)

Her: "......It really wasn't funny..."

Him: "Good thing I keep my day job and save my money..."

Her: "Why do you always do that...???"

Him: "Huh, what was that...???"

Her: "Why are you making a rhyme to everything I say...?"

Him: [Turns and looks away] ;-)

Reviews

[Siena - Silent Awakenin..]

Awwh this was a sweet poem, and had a clever twist at the end... the way the description of his actions ryhmed were cool. Hmm i liked the way it was humerous, and not serious... like most of my poems :/ pha i really want to write some fun ones but im finding it hard. You're ma inspiration now, pha ;)

[Sami Khalil]

A very interesting poem and dialogue...Thank you for sharing...:)

[Sunny Skye]

Humor huh. Lol i liked it it was entertaining and i enjoyed reading it. Nice job.

-SkyeBlanco

[The Refined Poet]

unique poetic piece. great!

[A Black Rose]

Very Unique, Creative and Humorous.....I loved it.

[justjenn_2u]

Clever to say the least. I love the humor in this piece. It's nice to read something with a different format for a change.

[ghost writer]

LOL I spat my coffee at the screen on reading that 'fucked up face' line..

[Gregory]

:)

[Yellow Butterfly]

:o)

[mind_of_a_pisces]

Funny...that was cool...Love it...