Uncharted Mysteries

Love seeks love

 

My longing, yea even my prayer; to know your cryptic heart.

For, not knowing brings great travail on a course without a chart.

 

 

Can I know the  mysteries that you hold so deep within?

Or will I wander aimlessly in search of love again?

 

 

                

Reviews

[Ibex]

Very simple, but as I always use as a leading arguement against something complicated, simplicity is sometimes always the best. Pretty sad, but a really nice poem. Good job!

[CRAZYFACE]

I really like this one

[Emily Rose]

This is so simple, yet so sad. Even though you don't make a big deal out of the imagery or anything, your chart/course metaphor defines the poem and your emotion easily comes across. I feel the longing and the slight loss of confidence at the rebuff, yet there is still hope in the message. I like it.

[Janyce Helen Van Es]

Now, this is straight to the point. I love how you use metaphores of seamanship to express your love.