Picture Pefect.

The perfect image of simplex beauty.

She has the heart of a wishing well that is filled with undesirable happiness. Lovely laughter that fills the air with admirable loveliness. A smile that can't be touched as only of an angel. Eyes no ordinary surrounded by the senses of a halo. Sweet smell of a mid summers day. Wishing to state in her eyes passionately as I lay. The heart filled up with tons an tons of love and a soul of tough iron that can't be bent. To think she is a blessing from above is not far fetched. For the scent is of heaven sent..

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Who Cares]

Wow, you describe a very beautiful girl. The last line was rather clever, a beautiful phrase indeed. Your imagery is wonderful, and you have most definitely put time into this peice. You stuck to a wonderful rhyme scheme, that was more powerful toward the end. Grammatical problems here and there, but nothing too distracting. I would like to see you format this differently but never the less wonderful job.