Unfair life

The truth of knowing life is unfair.

Eyes do not decieve me please give me a hand an lead thee. Relieve me and heal upon the one's that need thee. Change is a work in progress people struggle to live. The world takes & takes when we should try and give. This life is unfair all year round. When you look to the sky you get no sound. We come crashing down while the richer continue to get richer. No longer poor for they get poorer. Words of wisdom can help then I will seek upon the one's in guidance. We all have pride we need to suck it up and stop being silent. All we have in this world is our word that cant be snatched like a thief in the night. We need to find the one sided path and make it right. Eyes please do not decieve me. Too much dim not enough light ffor all I have done can & will you forgive me??

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Author's Note

Put my heart out on this one. I put my heart n thoughts in all my work so appreciate the support n comments!! thankss

Reviews

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Very moving write.

"We all have pride we need to suck it up and stop being silent" ... That is a very powerful line and it will stick with me.

I liked this poem a lot, But not the structure lol but thats just me for some reason this form makes it harder for me to read. idk maybe its a flow thing like it all reads together, Structure gives it a stronger stand alone feeling. Hope I'm making sense here.

Nice work