Future Self

blowing up the stage,with

a step i'm singing without

knowing it,walking around

the stage people yelling at

me and taking pictures,where

am I,posters with a name of a 

famous rap star,when I realize

this is me,how did this happen,

looking in a mirror,I am a high 

schooler,but was in middle 

school a few minutes ago,

am I living my future self,

there is a constant beeping,

jumping up from my bed,

was it all a dream,getting

up to look in the mirror,

it was all reality

Reviews

[CommandoDolphin]

I find this an interesting look at the places where we go in our lives, as humans the wind will blow in all different directions. The ever shifting winds have changed from our past, through our present, and into the future. If we could see all of our memories at this point? Should we really want to, the confusion we would see, and our current biases might reject what we see ourselves become. Hmm...quite an interesting idea.

I like where you are going with this work, the ideas you portray are very idealistic.

What I would recommend is reformatting the piece, as readers it is very hard for us to read in this current way that it is all put together. And punctuation would be very good to add, but your writing style and preferences as the artist must come first.

Very good, I enjoyed pondering this poem. :)