The Faith Window

Just Believe

A frosty pane

Pictures a glorious scene.

The snow falls like white rain,

Fluffy sprinkles never to keep.

 

Afloat on an invisible current,

Finding its way.

A view heaven sent,
The faith window sustains.

 

Hopes whisper His Name

When faith gives wings.

Unleashing the power to aim

Until the spirit abundantly sings.

 

Filled with a desire

To bless with a purpose,

God never tires;

The faith window in us.

 

Believing a wish

Gives it flight.

Seeking it,

Gives it light.

 

A clear pane
Will always follow

A heart filled with His grace,

Looking through the faith window.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and strong words dear Poet.
"Hopes whisper His Name
When faith gives wings.
Unleashing the power to aim
Until the spirit abundantly sings."
The lines above. Strong and true. Thank you Melinda for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for reading and your review

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Melinda.

[papermush08]

I love this piece. Works well, God will always believe in you too if you don't give up your faith in Him. :)

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for reading and your review

[Robert]

Melinda, Another lovely piece you have written here. The wording is very descriptive and vivid. I really enjoyed reading this piece of yours. I also appreciate the format of the stanzas. Thank you for Sharing.

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for reading and your review

[Alex Cook]

I would love to post this on my web site with your permission. It is a new site but it is very well done. Please check it out and let me know. The address is
http://alexdeancook.wix.com/cooksworld-sci-fi
Have a great day. Alex

[Melinda McQueen]

Of course you can... I'm honored! Thanks. The link you gave didn't work.

[Valentine]

Yes, in hope we whisper His name, and He is always there to hear our cries and our pleas. Without God we are nothing. Valentine

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you so much for your review. Be blessed.

[JayceeC]

This reminds me of the wonder of shaking a snow-globe and watching it and watching it. It's a wondrous site but you always know it will eventually settle down.

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you so much for your review. Be blessed.

[gabiaimee]

"A clear pane
Will always follow"

I must always remember something like this when things get rough. God is always here for us and to guide us to where He wants us to be! Lovely expression of your faith...it is powerful! Wonderful write; thank you for sharing.

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you so much for your review. Be blessed.

[Alex Cook]

Excellent read. I really enjoyed.

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you so much for your review. Be blessed.

[Nadia B.]

Stunning poem, very well written and full of faith. This is greatly inspirational and I love the rhyme scheme you chose. Also the flow, it is as a water fountain, effortless and melodious. Even the way the text is written and spaced, the lines form what looks like a stone pillar on a stand, as faith should be, firm as a rock. Thank you so much for sharing!

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you so much for your review. Be blessed.

[AaronFreitas]

This is a beautiful write Melinda...I always enjoy your work and your positivity :)

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you so much for your review. Be blessed.