No One Knows...

How I feel.

How I deal.

How I release.

How I am at ease.

How I dream

When I want to scream.

How I hear my inner voice

Through the noise.

How I keep going.

How I keep sowing.

How I know sadness

But not forget I am blessed.

How I stay strong.

How I hear my song.

Who am I to say no one knows?

For all God’s people know He is on His Throne.

Reviews

[Kshitij Gupta]

Loved the way you put this together! I was expecting a different ending to this poem though, or perhaps I didn't understand the meaning of the line "Who am I to say no one knows?". It'd be kind of you to explain it.
Kudos

[Melinda McQueen]

Many go through heartache and can relate. Not only that, but God knows. :)

[Kshitij Gupta]

Oh, I get it now, thanks :)

[amskrinstal]

but not forget am blessed,~ you're right we blessed

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for your review. I appreciate it.

[amskrinstal]

but not forget am blessed,~ you're right we blessed

[Sunny]

I really enjoyed this one! I like how you put the Scripture at the end as well! Very nice, I hope to read more in the future.

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for your review. I appreciate it.

[Samaira]

This is beautifully written. I particularly liked 'how I hear my inner voice through all the noise'. Nicely done.

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for your review. I appreciate it.

[Pash]

beautiful beautiful beautiful piece...wow!!!

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for your review. I appreciate it.

[An owl on the moon]

Such a beautiful, hopeful song that rises from the darkness... your words are like the sunrise after a very long night. Blessings flowing endlessly.

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for your review. I appreciate it.

[Valentine]

With God in our hearts, all things are possible. We all need to be sowing God's seeds to this world. Valentine

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for your review. I appreciate it.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree and enjoyed the poetry.
"But not forget I am blessed.
How I stay strong.
How I hear my song.
Who am I to say no one knows? "
When you know peace. Everyone knows. Thank you Melinda for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for your review. I appreciate it.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Melinda.

[sinNsincerity]

Beautiful write Melinda and you are so right.

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for your review. I appreciate it.