This is beautifully written and conveys a reverence and peaceful spirit that so obviously guides you. I am sure that He enjoys it immensely. take care...dan
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thanks so much for reading and leaving your much appreciated review. God bless.
Beautiful and gentle words.
"A Love to replace my pain.
A Heart to listen,
A Heart to watch me rise again…
In Thy gentle grace."
Thank you Melinda for sharing the hopeful and amazing poetry.
Coyote
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thanks so much for reading and leaving your much appreciated review. God bless.
Melinda I found the first stanza to be not as good as the rest - maybe the use of two 'ush' type words did it..?
The rest are beautiful and each one of the others could be a lovely stand alone micro-prayer/poem.
Keep writing my friend.
:)
And i pray lord my soul you`ll keep..and keep my mind from wandering away
and keep me in my faith till your return one day...keep me still keep me humble
overlook me if i mumble..my faith is high,and i`m here on my knees..keep me humble if you please..
Hello, I'm Melinda from Texas. I am a published author. I'm in a chair with Cerebral Palsy, and writing is my outlet. I have found deep pleasure in writing poetry. Writing helps me express my emotio.. more..