Without You

A Haiku.

Without You

 

By Melinda McQueen

Grey fills a low sky,

Hanging its head in queer shame…

My heart without you.

Reviews

[B]

The heart just goes grey in the absence of a lover
just get restless with everything
Fed up
Bored
lol
So i know exactly what you write of here

[Melinda McQueen]

Thanks for stopping by!

[Valentine]

Nice write. Valentine Not many can write these.

[Melinda McQueen]

Thanks for stopping by! God bless.

[samiha zubair]

Sometimes the missing person is your wholesome connection between you and your surroundings

[Melinda McQueen]

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[Jamestown]

Short sweet and well thought out and executed!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Melinda McQueen]

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[Willard Wells]

Nicely done young lady. Very nice.

[Melinda McQueen]

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[Coyote Poetry]

You said everything in the few words. A amazing poem dear Melinda.
Coyote

[Melinda McQueen]

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[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Melinda.

[Perkele.7885]

This a lovely little poem of remembrance if I am understanding;
(queer shame) correctly.

[Melinda McQueen]

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[Gee]

A sad one to start the day,nice Melinda

[Melinda McQueen]

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[Robert]

This is a heartfelt, ad poem Melinda .

[Melinda McQueen]

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[wordman]

a sad write,without you,the sky is gray

[Melinda McQueen]

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[wordman]

i left a heart print,your welcome

[wordman]

you still have that wedding ring i sent you,blue and diamonds,now you know i`m the father to kwp`s children,but she don`t mind

[Melinda McQueen]

lol who do you like more? Yes I still have my ring!

[wordman]

i will never tell,but her hair is brown,and her eyes are too !

[Melinda McQueen]

lol you're funny.