Red Dress

Red Dress

 

A Limerick by Melinda McQueen

   

She dances and spins

as it flows in the wind.

Closing her eyes at any chance,

she recalls the dance

in the red dress which never happened.

Reviews

[dan]

Such a vivid description of a wish for fruition. At least the dance DID happen in your mind's imagination, so you DID get to live and to dance to the beautiful music of the mind. Very nicely written. take care...dan

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for your review. God bless.

[Angelic_Starchild]

Such a short piece of writing but it tells a very broad story. Wonderfully done Melinda!

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for your review. I appreciate it.

[Willard Wells]

Sometimes dreams are what make us the happiest. Our dreams are perfect and less change for error. Nicely done.

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts

[B]

I love this write
somehow a red dress is always just perfect
i must admit i have done this before

and its always a red dress

stunning

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts

[Gee]

A memory forever ingrained of times gone by,better times.Nice Melinda

[Melinda McQueen]

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[Valentine]

Some of us only have dreams left to hang on to. Nothing can last forever, all things die eventually. Valentine

[Melinda McQueen]

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[wordman]

in my dreams ,i dance with my red dress ,and maybe you will !

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem dear Melinda. A red dress and to dance. Good to know many dances and a lot of laughter. A person who can make you smile and laugh. Is someone , you want forever. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts. It's a memory from long ago that often surfaces like it did today.

[Coyote Poetry]

Good memories will return and you are welcome Melinda.