The Blue Deep

The Blue Deep

 

Reaching… reaching…

Looking up from the tunnel.

Seeing a gleam of light seeping

Through the rubble.

 

Shards of pieces

From my past I keep,

Crystalize and releases

Into the blue deep.

 

Reaching… reaching…

Daring to be

What I’m seeing

On the inside of me.

 

What I know as my truth,

Where I allow my mind to leap…

Finds me in full bloom,

Swimming into the blue deep.

 

Reaching… reaching…

Into the depths of my soul.

For when I’m believing,

The blue deep becomes my own.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the positive energy and the drive of your words.
"What I know as my truth,
Where I allow my mind to leap…
Finds me in full bloom,
Swimming into the blue deep. "
The above lines I liked. To leap into open water without fear. You know you are alive. Thank you Melinda for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for reading. God bless.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Melinda.

[Philip Muls]

Hi Melinda, you describe connecting with your essence, your true nature. To me the crucial sentence is 'where I allow my mind to leap...'

It is indeed a leap of faith to just let go, to just let it be. I have trouble doing that and I think it is great that you are able to.

Well done.

[Melinda McQueen]

You could say writing is my therapy. ......

[samparks,sam]

That so sweet feeling I see in you. who is that

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for reading.

[wordman]

i guess the real person is your conscience ,your inner soul

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for reading.