She Walks

She Walks

 

She walks along the way,

Having her own say.

Doing everything she needs,

Her desires are released.

 

She has no worries,

And is truly free.

At her pardon,

She walks through her garden.

 

She stays the course,

Even when things become worse.

For she knows her worth

Even when her plans don’t work.

 

She lives out her hopes

In a way to cope.

Though she tires,

She walks through the fire.

 

She skips along

To her song,

Tuned to her dream
Of all she wants to be.

 

She hears her desires loud and clear

And gives no place to fear.

Playing out her unreachable goals,

She walks on her own.

 

She dreams beneath closed eyelids

Of all she wants to cherish.

In her dreams, she stands tall…

Where she walks.

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

seemed more like a fairy tale of princess have you dropped down in such interesting choice of words. rhythmic portion is well adjusted as well. kept me hooked with your theme. great job!

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for your words.

[andrew mitchell]

A sad write for me, when all you have is a dream while you cope with reality. Tough task for dreams/goals are just something to strive for but always out of reach.

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for your words.

[iamshadowine]

"She hears her desires loud and clear
And gives no place to fear.
Playing out her unreachable goals,
She walks on her own."

Pretty amazing lines!! Loved your work
Keep writing :)

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for your words.

[guy drori]

Wonderful . . . "She stays the course even when things become worse," is something difficult to live by. Many times we are thrown off balance by bad events that ccur to us.
"She skips along to her song, tuned to her dream of all she wants to be" is a stanza that brought a smile to my face. It paints an image of freedom.

Thanks for sharing Melinda . . . glad to have read this :)

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for your words.

[Valentine]

Melinda, I know you have many challenges in your short life...more than most people have in a lifetime. Your strong faith is something I admire. I was ill a lot in my life, had seizures 10 years...was prayed for by a 3 year old and finally God healed me. Never give up the faith Sweetie. Valentine

[Melinda McQueen]

God is amazing. :) Thank you for sharing.

[HeyJadeXO]

Very beautiful Melinda !

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you so much.

[wordman]

at night she can be free,a place of content in her dream world

[Melinda McQueen]

You are right. Thank you so much.

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and beautiful poetry dear Melinda.
"She dreams beneath closed eyelids
Of all she wants to cherish.
In her dreams, she stands tall…
Where she walks."
I like the want and the gentle drive of the poetry. I love your work my friend. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you so much.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Melinda.