The Rustling of the Spirit

The Rustling of the Spirit

As a cool breeze blows,

And is fully known,

So too, is the Holy Spirit

Who dwells in all who hear it.

 

Abiding in a special place

Meant only for His grace,

A gentle calling, do you feel it?

The rustling of the Spirit.

 

A tender touch of the truest love,

A work begun.

As the wind scatters fallen leaves in haste,

The Holy Spirit gathers brokenness in His grace.

 

Eyes are opened

And hearts deepened,

Humbled souls fear it;

The rustling of the Spirit.

 

A love to seek,

Ready to make you complete.

Ever there, ever willing,

His power to the soul is stilling.

 

How glorious is the Lord

Who reigns forevermore.

Let all adhere it;

The rustling of the Spirit.

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Spiritual and joyous tribute to the Holy Spirit. Eloquent words, Beautiful form, flow, imagery, rhythm and rhyme. Great musicality in this poem- would make a lovely song. Amen!

[Melinda McQueen]

Thanks so much for your review. God bless.

[yuhee]

Such beautiful spiritual poem. Made my day. I'm glad to read this.

[Melinda McQueen]

Thanks so much for your review. God bless.

[Joanna Matilda Barlow]

Another Spiritual poem. Nice work. As always. Keep at it.

[Melinda McQueen]

Thanks so much for your review. God bless.

[Tony Jordan]

It is such a lyrical and loving prayer of a poem Melinda - excellent.

[Melinda McQueen]

Thanks so much for your review. God bless.

[Coyote Poetry]

We need to seek peace in prayer. I liked and enjoyed your words and thoughts dear Melinda. We need to open our eyes and heart. Know love, kindness and God. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Melinda McQueen]

Thanks so much for your review. God bless.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Melinda.

[wordman]

the rustling of the spirit sounds like the spirit is calling on some one

[Melinda McQueen]

Thanks so much for your review. God bless.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Your poetic symbolism helps the reader to obtain a comprehensive understanding of religious poetry, through which they are liberated. Pleasantly flowing gentle composition of praise and glorification … bless! :-)

[Melinda McQueen]

Thanks for reading.

[Brent]

I like how you repeat the phrase "the rustling of the Spirit" to emphasize how God is ever present in our lives. Your poem is powerful and inspirational.

As you mention, the Lord supports and empowers people to live fully. Your poem could be a song!

[Melinda McQueen]

Thanks for reading.