When You Fell

When You Fell

 

My heart skipped a beat,

It was sudden, humbling

Little by little,

You were tumbling.

 

I watched as your resolve gave way,

And you lost all control of yourself.

I admit it… I was giddy

When you fell.

 

It was indeed something to behold,

A force too big to stop.

I didn’t try to steady you,

But was overjoyed when you dropped!

 

I hope you didn’t mind

My moment of glee.

For I was over the moon

When you fell in love with me.

 

Melinda McQueen Rodgers

May 6, 2021

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

Watching someone fall in love with you is an amazing experience to behold

[Melinda McQueen]

yes it is. Thanks for reading.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Ps my apologies I need another coffee it’s early here
I thought you mentioned horses 🐎
Sorry xx but love your poem horses or not !!!

[Melinda McQueen]

You may have read my reply to someone else about horses. lol No biggie.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

No worries
Maybe you should write one now
Maybe it’s a sign 🪧

[Melinda McQueen]

Maaaaaaybeee :)

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

I’ll wait
Lol

[Melinda McQueen]

lol ok.... stay tuned! :)

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Beautiful write you are very talented
Love horses
But don t ride

[Kerra]

This is so wonderful, much enjoyed this reading this

[Melinda McQueen]

Thanks for your review.
Is that your horse in the pic? :)

[Kerra]

I have about 7 horses, that is one, yes

[Melinda McQueen]

I love horses.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Oh how delightful where this one ended up....

He fell flat on his heart.

the best way and place to fall.
j.

[Melinda McQueen]

Thanks for reading. I wanted to shock my readers! lol