Six Word Poetry

                                                Six Word Poetry

 

Rain pours.
Head on pillow.

Out.

 

MMR

8/16/2021

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What’s heaven number?

I’ll call Mom.

 

MMR

8/16/2021

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Curly hair,
nice smile,
my Andy.

 

MMR

8/16/2021

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Baby’s first

breath,
mother’s second

heart.

 

MMR

8/16/2021

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“I love you.”

Pinocchio’s nose grew.

 

MMR

8/16/2021

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You did well dear Melinda. You master the six-word poetry.
"Baby’s first
breath,
mother’s second
heart."
The above poem. So good, so wonderful. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry my friend.
Coyote

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Melinda.

[Chris Shaw]

An interesting way of offering brevity. Few words, high on meaning.

Chris

[Melinda McQueen]

I'm new to it. I find it fun.Thanks for reading.

[John the Baptist]

Never heard of this form before. Reminds me somewhat of haiku.

[Melinda McQueen]

I'm new to it. I find it fun.Thanks for reading.