My Beloved

My Beloved

(Tanka Poem)

 

My lover is here

 

To stay forever in my life.

 

He carries my heart,

 

Like a torch afire, he lights.

 

My beloved is my delight!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful poem for love dear Melinda. I loved the complete poem. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Melinda McQueen]

Thanks for reading and taking time to review.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Melinda.

[barleygirl]

I enjoy doing tankas & yours are well-crafted with rhyme & a lyrical rhythm. Your message could apply to a special beloved or to God or to the magic of life itself. Thank you for sharing your loving ditty (((HUGS)))

[Melinda McQueen]

Thanks for reading and leaving your review.

[barleygirl]

I just thought of something. If you like doing tankas you may enjoy trying a somonka. That's two tankas where one says something the the other one is like an answer. Some people do it like two people in love speaking to one another. I recently did one showing two sides of a long-debated issue. Just an idea . . .

[Melinda McQueen]

Oh neat. I may give it a try!