This one captures so well, your key motivation for writing poetry here; that of your devotion to Christian faith. And, that you see yourself as a vessel; for sharing God's words. I wish you well.
Am here again, forgive - I really should have visited before now. Have you been thinking of creating more poetry, has it become diffcult for you? You HAD some wonderful thoughts, ideas.
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1 Year Ago
What do you mean? are you talking about my not posting poems as frequently? I'm busy writing a book... read moreWhat do you mean? are you talking about my not posting poems as frequently? I'm busy writing a book.
1 Year Ago
Forgive, I didn't know you were/are writing a book..
Dang.
Not a huge fan of higher authority or deity, especially with how I was raised extremely religious.
But this is a powerful write, regardless of its intended direction, I forged my own understanding amid the crossed paths.
I am very glad you find comfort in poetry, it is the ultimate equalizer between old and poor.
Rap was first created by the impoverished, as you do not need anything to begin.
You just open your mouth (or pick up a pen/keyboard), and you are knee-deep in the craft.
Wonderful, and thanks for sharing
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1 Year Ago
Thanks. Yes, religion can be a bit much. Jesus doesn't like when people are too religious,
A beautiful and finely created poem that praises the creator of the All Around and its meaning. Thank you so much, Melinda, your words extend far more and wider than a screen, my friend.
Thank you for reading and for your review. Much appreciated.
1 Year Ago
Your words remind me that courage is ever present in the hands of the eternal giver. My very best .. read moreYour words remind me that courage is ever present in the hands of the eternal giver. My very best wishes and admiration, Melinda.
I am glad you can type dear Melinda. You are a needed voice in our world.
"Even so, here I am,
knowing You can use even me.
Let my typed words spread
like a wildfire to all in need."
The above lines were my favorite. Thank you for what you do my dear friend.
Coyote
Very interesting piece Melinda. I've been contemplating spirituality myself lately, it's the great mystery after all... may you find light and purpose and meaning.
No words written in praise of God are meager and no vessel unworthy of His love when written or uttered with a pure heart. One word of true praise from an honest woman or man are worth more and far likelier to reach His ears than all the combined writings of the wisest dissemblers. Thank you for another effective spiritual write.
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1 Year Ago
Thank you for your touching review. I love that we can praise Him right where we are.
Hello, I'm Melinda from Texas. I am a published author. I'm in a chair with Cerebral Palsy, and writing is my outlet. I have found deep pleasure in writing poetry. Writing helps me express my emotio.. more..