"Will You Love Me"

Will you love me when I'm older

will you love me when I'm grey.

Will you always smile that smile

like you did that day.

Will you love me when I'm sad

hurt...and feeling blue.

Will you feel the way you did 

when our love was so brand new.

Will you love me more tomorrow

be my woman till the end.

Will you walk with me forever 

be my lover and my best friend.

Will you pray with me each day

giving thanks to God above...

For all that we've been blessed with

for our life and for our love.

Will you love me...

Night.2013

Reviews

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

When two people recite there vows, they say "till death do us part" ..
How many truly keep that sacred vow , forever after .. ?
Not many I think .. I believe You are a Man of His word, and you will respect
The vows made before God .. Don't settle for anything less than true Love ..

Beautiful, Lovely .. Jazz xx

[Night]

...I think I just wrote some wonderful wedding vows huh...lol. Maybe some day for me...God willing...:)

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

XX J. :)

[Night]

maybe for you too...one can dream can't they...? Love you Jazz.:)

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

Love you David .. xx

[Asilem]

Good lord, you can write such sweet poems. I love your work.

[Night]

Ooops...I missed this one. Thank you for the love my friend....be well and live each day smiling...=)

[Be myself!]

I wish people would read this before they say their vows.

[Night]

Awe...thank you and I agree...:)

[Be myself!]

Your welcome

[Aya]

Nice one i like it alot, alot of questions and demand
And it gives a picture of true love as it should be when all the answers are Yes!
Wonderful poem

[Night]

...yes, true love indeed....thank you...:)

[The Dreamer]

lovely!! :) short and sweet.

[Night]

...well thank you very much...:)

[KAOlmsted]

No.



Well...maybe.




Okay. Yes ;-)

[Night]

...awe kimmer, so sweet, thank you...:)

[KAOlmsted]

Always my pleasure ;-)

[LA Lorena]

Nicely penned David.

[Night]

...Good morning my friend...hope this day shines bright for you...and thank you...:)

[Frieda P]

First thing I thought of was the Beatles, 'When I'm 64'...not too shabby for background music for your poetry reading. As usual, heartfelt and poignant David. Nice one.

[Night]

...thank you Frieda.:)

[Frieda P]

My pleasure for sure. :-)

[DIVYA]

Reads beautiful but a little difficult to follow through...
May God bless those who stay faithful and sincere till death does apart. It's a great accomplishment.
Thank you.

[Night]

...thank you my friend...:)

[Night]

I changed the format...I think it reads better now....:)

[DIVYA]

Oh yes! Even better than before. A perfect poem for an abiding loving husband-wife! :)

[Night]

...beautiful...:)

[Me]

It made me smile, i like it a lot, wish it was longer :)

[Night]

...thank you...:)