"I've Lost Myself"

"I've lost myself"...a poem by Night.2011 Posted On 01/04/2011 04:44:46

I've lost myself, all I do is cry

I'm all alone now, and I don't know why.

Something's different, what could it be...

I keep asking myself, am I still me?

I can see them there, just standing around

tears from my eye's, fall to the ground.

Am I awake or is this a dream...

why can't anyone hear me scream?

Thank you and may God bless...Night.2012

Reviews

[s y e]

Oh gosh. This is terrible.
Again, you have a way with words that just speak. Amazing.

[Night]

...this was a poetry contest, the picture was posted and you then wrote about the picture...in my mind, the person is dead and doesn't know it yet...creepy huh...lol. I watch allot of scary movies...lol.

[s y e]

Ooooh, I see. Wow... that's what I would have said to be honest LOL. I love all those ghostie movies hehe

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Agonizing

Thanks for posting

[Night]

...I know huh, a real nightmare...and thank you...:)