"Silence"

She whispers not a word

this sometimes friend of mine.

 

She comforts me on darkest days

and soothes this troubled mind.

 

She brings me back and helps me see

the folly of my ways.

 

I know one day she'll claim my soul

at the end of days.

 

So until that day should come

She's welcome by my side.

 

She'll always be a part of me

this sometimes friend of mine.

 

 copyright © Night.2013

Reviews

[RichGee]

Great poetry! Perfect......

[Night]

Well thank you very much.

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarri..]

Another spellbinding elegant piece!! :)

[Night]

...again, thank you very much.:)

[rnuff]

this is so wonderful and sweet.

[Night]

...thank you Shorty.:)

[Carolann Dowsett]

This is lovely, makes me wonder who she is, I really like the term 'This sometimes friend of mine'

[Night]

...she is Silence, the quiet time's in my daily life. She comforts me when the days been hectic, she is my escape from the bustle of the world...but she isn't always able to be there...she's my "sometimes" friend...lol.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Oh of course I should have seen that :) I love it, it's amazing :)

[Night]

...thank you, I think you're amazing...:)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you :)

[Night]

...I sure do like you...:)

[C]

I really like "this sometimes friend of mine"!
A real poet!

[Night]

...thank you very much.:)

[Salar Majak]

wow, this is a great poem, great flow too, i love it!

[Night]

...thank you so much Aurora...blessings to you.:)

[Salar Majak]

:) you are welcome