"Dream Lover"

...An unintentional collab. with my dear sweet friend Carolann.:)

"Shall it be that I too, holding love so dear
should kindle the flame of hope ."

We dance together in our dreams
to the sweet melody of eternity

Until the daylight comes upon our hearts 
to steal our dreams and make us part

Till mornings light your love I hold
a dance of hope, a love untold.

Once more I hope of love so sweet
when once again, in dream we meet.

Night.2013

Author's Note

...this all started when I read and commented on Carolanns poem: "Love Reborn". She is such an amazing artist and a wonderful woman...please give her much love...Night.

Reviews

[jdr / Jennifer]

This is a beautiful piece of pure brilliance. You write with such elegance-

'Till mornings light your love I hold
a dance of hope, a love untold.
Once more I hope of love so sweet
when once again, in dream we meet.'

Now if I can just get my boyfriend to write like this- ;) LOL

[Night]

...lol. Thank you jenn:)

[Asilem]

Aw... so sweet my heart ached in sweet agony to read it.

[Night]

...thank you my friend very much...:)

[Asilem]

Welcome. :)

[gabrielle]

Reading this poem makes me feel sad...reminded me of my dream lover from the past ...^__^... sweet write.

[Night]

...I''ve come to realize that the only dreams that do come true are te dreams that we make come true...thanks my friend...:)

[MOON]

Love this write has an olde worlde charm , cant tell its a collabaration seamless almost . Lovely

[Night]

...thank you very much.:)

[Rossen]

your a true poet in my view... 100/100

[Night]

...thank you very much.:)

[KAOlmsted]

Lovely. Very good collaboration...this is the second time today I heard this poet's name; I'll be sure to check her out.

[Night]

...cool, she's good...and thank you;)

[KAOlmsted]

My pleasure.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Such a sweet sweet poem.... :O)

[Night]

...thank you.:)

[Dr. Wood ?]

quite lovely this....Well written sir

[Night]

very good then, carry on...:)

[Dr. Wood ?]

Carry on...love is coming to us all....cue guitars

[Be myself!]

Beautiful piece. I love it.

[Night]

...thank you very much...:)

[Be myself!]

Your welcome

[The Dreamer]

beautiful "DREAM lover" !! i loved it! most of all cuz i have a dream lover too :P LOL
loved the last two lines...

[Night]

...sweet, thank you very much.:)

[Salar Majak]

:) great respond for a magnificent write! both of you are so very talented and i am very honored to be among you guys

[Night]

...thank you so very much.:)