"Loves Desire"

...Inspired by a lovely friend of mine...Carolann.

I saw the vision clearly

it stayed with me awhile

 Though my soul was weary

I found myself with smile.

It seemed but just a dream

This vision from afar

And in my heart was seen

The brightness of a star.

 Like the stars that shine

Forever gems of fire

So in this heart I find

A light of loves desire.

Night.2013

Author's Note

...inspired by and written for a very beautiful and talented woman, my lovely friend Carolann. Without her light this world would be a darker place...Night.2013

Reviews

[Frieda P]

How is anyone supposed to concentrate with that photo up there is what I want to know?! mmmm, anyway, I thought your last poem I read of yours was for her, thanks for setting me straight. ;-)

Very sweet, compassionate and strong, much like yourself David.

[Night]

Awe Frieda, you're a gem...i'm really starting to like you..lol.

[Frieda P]

hahahah NO not that! ;-P

[Night]

...lol. You're such a nut...:)

[Frieda P]

I can deal with that, been called worse. :-D

[Asilem]

This is so sweet! I love your tattoo collection by the way.

[Night]

...lol. Thanks.

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

Sweet .. maybe a few words missing .. but it doesn't take away from the theme ..

Love-ly .. Jazz x :)..................>>

[Night]

yeah, I tend to write in shorthand allot...lol. Thanks Jazz.:)

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

Slow down David .. I do the same ... .. I am my worse critic !! .. Love You !!

[rnuff]

awe this is a wonderful sweet write.
simply amazing : )

[Night]

...thank you so much...:)