'Left Unseen"

And then there are these three...Faith, Hope, and Love, and the greatest of these is love.

On the brink of madness

I blink to clear mine eyes.

The heart of you, looked so brand new

tis mine I did despise.

A brokenness left within

with nought a chance to heal.

Tis time they say, that heals all wounds

and mine has yet to feel.

The wonders of this world

of love and things between...

 

Have left the eyes and heart of mine

with beauty left unseen.

Night.2013 

Reviews

[Written Volumes]

I believe it is an inclination of how we proceed our hearts. Sometimes, its blinded by the things we are never left to see. Meaning, when secrets are revealed, and the heart cannot believe what it is seeing, it just wants to "vanish" into thin air.

Very nicely written!

[Night]

...thank you very much.=)

[Written Volumes]

You're welcome!

[Emerald Seas]

A very rich, deep writing within so few stanzas. Thought provoking.

[Night]

...deep indeed my friend, like facets in a diamond...thank you very much...=)

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarri..]

God! this poem is so much me!!
I feel it with every letter...
I tried to fall in love after the passing of my fiancee but that was impossible, my only regret is that girl who had to suffer for my tries....

Good one!

[Night]

...Thank you my friend...:)