Bleeding / Roads / Excercise

Senryu and haiku

BLEEDING

When broken feels raw
As a throbbing from a cut
Truth must weep as deep.


ROADS

Where choices begin
Some are quick to find its end
Wise stays journeying.

EXERCISE

Gluttony in jeans
Bids me a good morning smirk
Chews gum as he goes.

Reviews

[Draven]

All of these are indeed very well written. Bleeding is by far the best.

[Vidya Bacchus]

This was very wise Poetic Fluffer.Great poem :)

[Butch Decatoria]

Thank you for your kind review.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome it was just the truth :)

[Sami Khalil]

A good combo of poetic intelligence. Bravo...........

[Butch Decatoria]

Thanks Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)......