VATTO / HIGH

3 Senreyu/Haiku

VATTO

Gang signs inked for Bloods

Beaner in a low Beamer

Cool kissing his gun.

HIGH

Yearning for the sky

smoking rolled up trees in blunts

couch potato drowns.

LOW

Dirty pinstripe suit

man about town, down and out

sells his news for shoes.

Reviews

[realmwriter]

This is bloody brilliant my friend. And yes, I agree with Ana Sophia, the Senryu works beautifully.

[Butch Decatoria]

Thank you so much. It can go badly or find itself fitting to be as profound as 3 lines can allow... Many rewrites and editing seem to be a part of the process in this form... Lucky I at least meant every word and got gold... Thanks guys for kind comments...

[realmwriter]

You did indeed get gold. You are very welcome.

[Matching Socks]

Agree with Frieda, first one is killer.
High and low painted apropos for sure.
Love the Senryu delivery.

[Frieda P]

You hit quite a few notes here PF...first one is killer. Love the second 'high' so apropos. We all know of that last guy...well done.

[Butch Decatoria]

Thank you thank you, mean it so said it twice...

[Frieda P]

The pleasure was mine...you're welcome 2x's...