Little Kaleidoscope (3 HAIKU)

w/ In Tombs & Deeply (Blue)

LIL KALEIDOSCOPE

Peering through her smile

little sister's pinwheel flight

twirling motley skirts.

ENTOMBED

Monuments of yore

stone temple sarcophagi

old gods buried there.

DEEPLY (Blue)

How poignant of face

sunset eyes reflect much depth

I see how you feel.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

really excellent senryu here...i am especially fond of the third one..."I see how you feel"---

and "twirling motley skirts" is such a good line...

[Butch Decatoria]

Thank you for reviewing...