Un-Noticed (NONET)

High speed elocution and magnetized

eyes / to one another's burrowing,

glaring / the two of you connect

touching without but a smile,

secrets of lover's past

while I'm / un-noticed /

pebble or leaf

in a sea

drifting

lost.

Reviews

[Damian Alan Gray]

Absolutely - f*****g - astonishing! Loved every word!

[Rainbowco]

Totally Exquisite in its entirety, but the ending
while I'm / un-noticed /
pebble or leaf
in a sea
drifting
lost.
Just takes my breath away.

[Butch Decatoria]

thanks so much...