Stop.

Stop.          I felt you stop loving me. Emotions like a glass of liquid memories s. h. a. t. t. e. r. e. d.        I felt you stop. caring less if at all, due to my sickness my mind's disturbance, instead of affection you are sorry apethetic as if at fault        I felt you resent me even like inheriting an old red-barn  farm, once had Summers running through dandelions as a child's favorite vacation, now unfertile soil to sow alone resenting the effort put, but feel obligated...        I felt you stop loving me avoiding my touch as if contagious of some affliction shallow death and instant sorrow - devoid of joy      save for a glass of memories   s. h. a. t. t. e. r. e. d. felt   you   stop catching me                       so so sorry...

Reviews

[Kat Williams]

beautiful...just hurt beauty

[The Tao of Bri]

this bleeeds sadness...I guess it is because I felt this soo much with your ripping heart spilling on the page...and life has a way of shoing you reality huh? Tears... Hope your light returns at the end of this tunnel...Peace and Light!

[Dalaina Renee]

Wow! Thats all I can say! Good job!