Sex & Love

Comparison.

The mechanics of body language

sex in it's sweet sweat shops

these subtlety's

         skins swiss-navy slick

homo-erotica's evolution - our rubbing

two fleshy sticks

"pill-poppin' easy" this is

                          sex is   a floozy

                          a fish    to catch

                                      to release

 in bed, in baths - unleashed

defeatist

without and with / in / door

which revolve

the staccato silence then evolves

      to a symphonic sing-song of meat

a detached unfettered

feast

      from all hearts involved

many emotions unresolved

hatched

      from wratchet tight sheets

      satin security unmatched

yet melts away

with every faltering step

and constancy of fights for validity

      the normalcy of gay circuit weddings

            f*****g like mutes

                      under the disco ball

with an open mouth - seal sounds

a chorus of barking for the sea...

 

Trust and casual conversations - is almost

to keep us stable or sane

no modivational lust

     tho' it speaks without shame

     out of turn

sex is easy, unmaned

         easy to blame

         easy like Kodak / to share, to play

like a multi-player game

hollywood square's celebrity fame

     a flame is our spirit's

     flagrante bane

tabloid worthy paparazzi mud

 

but Love, oh Love...

 

To know now love

consider me a deep pond

     an unmoving lilly

unhindered beautiful

love is wrought with fragility

and tinder...

 

Too much fire without water

can burn us to cinders.

 

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"symphonic sing-song of meat
a detached unfettered
feast
from all hearts involved
many emotions unresolved"

[Sami Khalil]

A good comparison indeed between the fine lines of love and sex. I join in the chorus of validity...Bravo...................

[SilentOrchestra]

The words were really witty. I really liked how you mixied up the description of love, sex with unique expressions which added spice to the poem as a whole. Well done.