Spirit Walk

 

Panacea

            Predestined

                        Predetermined manifesto

The Mother’s womb where spirit blooms

Instinctual wonderment

 

The kind are almost extinct

Wish and their screaming wings

To stars moon dreams…

The loneliest finds wisdom

Northward believing

So gains his willful strength

Being

            A “Self” beginning

                        Un-scrawling secret

Once lauded in lament

Gone are its notes

And perforce coins’ anarchy

Collects in its place pockets full

Full of glory beauty

Accounts rather for star gazing,

Advice when consideration

Glows

Knowing now a purpose in

In the Truthful

Journey

Destined

            Fulfilling

                        Lesser roads to constellations

                        Worthy of ghosts memories din

                       

Renderings from every heaven

                        In evenings the stars destiny is written

 

 

Reviews

[Matching Socks]

It felt like taking a walk with the ghosts of our past, the good ghosts not the bad ones.
Like seeing the potential in everything and understanding all that might have been and was.

[Sami Khalil]

"The kind are almost extinct

Wish and their screaming wings

To stars moon dreams…

The loneliest finds wisdom

Northward believing'

A very beautiful poem. Those lines are my favorite...:)

[Butch Decatoria]

Thank you for your review...

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[frivolous treasures]

What a beautifully written poem, that just flows with the form... I kept stopping at a line saying 'this is my favorite line' then I just kept reading... LOL needless to say, i really enjoyed it. What a clean, precise, nostalgic poem you've written... Great verse!
Do you have glue? I daresay my mind's been blown to gibletts....

Wonderful write :)

[Butch Decatoria]

Thank you so much for your kind review, it humbles me and appreciate the luv. thanks again.

[frivolous treasures]

My pleasure, sir, to read such wonderful verses :) so thank you ^^