My Song

A nice short poem

Here it is, here goes my song

Trying to do right, yet i do wrong

Living my life, living not to care

Falling into traps, gasping for air

So many leaders, who do i follow? 

So many foods, which do i swallow?

The best thing, well, the best thing is freedom

So when we read poems can't we just read em

Seeing to that, all's figured out 

Simple living is what life's all about!

Author's Note

A poem about life

Reviews

[just is]

This is a wonderful write, most enjoyable read.

[DeevaMarx]

Normally I don't really like poems that rhyme, I feel they lose their depth. This one however, it suited perfectly. Great job.

[Poetic Beauty]

I love how the ending sums it all up. I like the questions you ask in this poem. Life is about simple pleasures and enjoying what we have in that moment.

[Amanda]

This was quite good. Thank you for sharing!

[Sheila Kline]

Oh yes! Many have a tendency to make the simple matters more complicated by believing the answer is found in the "not easily solved" venue. Often the best way of life looms before us, and we take the long way to happiness!
Let us each strive to opt for the simple! A nice write in advising us to do just that!