*Remember Me*

Will you remember me...?

~Remember Me~ 

I am fading into the mist of you
Teardrops roll down my cheeks
But they would freeze in time
If touched by your icy fingertips…

 

I am drowning in your foggy image
Gray haze covers my view
But only for a moment
Time does not heal my misery
Your face still haunts my dreams…

 

I am falling into the craters of you
Midnight black-holes overwhelm me
But somehow, you are still my light
Even after you stomped all over my heart
Leaving me only to reminisce…

 

I am fading, drowning, and falling,

Smeared in your mind;
Like rainbow colors on a white canvas… 

You paint new picture-perfect memories,
She is your new Sunrise…
And I am left…
…only…
To be forgotten…
 

Author's Note

After the loss of a great love feelings and emotions still linger...leaving one to think will you still 'Remember Me'...

Reviews

[Lafayette]

I love the way your words paint the picture

[An Ordinary Woman]

Yeah, feelings do linger, a beautiful expression of that here.

Smeared in your mind;

Like rainbow colors on a white canvas... lovely writing, I can easily relate to your words. I enjoyed this.

[Chrystin]

wow!!!!
you are really good:)
You have to keep writing:)
Chrystin

[Robert Luna]

I love your conveying of such a deep impacted of the emotions and feeling that you are left with after such a horrible ending. You really captured the feeling of the emotions and placed them on display for us all to pay attention to and bear witness. Really powerfully done. I am including a link to one of my pieces that i thought you might relate to after reading this.

You VS MeA Poem by Robert Luna

[Raven Wilson]

Wow, this is an amazing piece...such emotion and power run through it. I swear I was fairly electrocuted by its intensity....Very nice, I liked it alot. ^_^