*His Promise*

I was inspired one sunday by a sermon that I heard in church...

My life is a numberless tape measure

Stretched out between Gods two hands

I looked to Him and He said...

"Every line big or small

Represents the bumps and problems

That you'll inquire throughout your life..."

And as I began to weep

He wiped away my tears and said...

"My child I have already made a way..."

Author's Note

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Reviews

[~crazy Beautiful~]

this was a good piece but i feel some expansion could make is amazing
the first two lines were what grabbed me into this piece
My life is a numberless tape measure
Stretched out between Gods two hands
beautiful
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[Robert Wilson]

Wow that's beautiful. One complaint though. "Gods" should be "God's." But other than that, it's a good piece.

[Robert Luna]

[forfila]

I love it, because though it speaks of turmoil and hasedship , it also speaks of a way through. Vey good