Brand New

 

                    Brand New

 

I hate to hear about who you’ve been with

And what you did with this girl and that one

I wonder is anything I’m doing brand new?

Did she touch you like this, or kiss you like that?

Did she move like that, or squeeze you like this?

I feel like I’m in a contest with your past

Is anything I’m doing brand new?

 

We have been together for a while now

Each time I feel like I’m competing with myself

Is anything I’m doing brand new?

Baby tell me your fantasies

So I can fulfill each and everyone

I hate the thought of you being used to me

That’s why I want every time to feel brand new.

Author's Note

Im in competition with myself...is anythin i'm doin brand new?

Reviews

[Xeru]

Never feel like you have to compete for a man's affections. This piece feels very real. If you are being held to clips of memories he isnt comparing you to a person but to pieces of experiences. Dont decide to split yourself into like experiences because he will never see you as a person. Its ok to hold your expectations towards someone instead of them towards you. I respect this piece. Individual love is to be appreciated for what it is in it own unique wrapper

[Charles D. Moorer]

I like this very much. You capture your situation very well.

[SoHopeful]

Me being only 16, I can't fully relate to this poem but being someone in a relationship, I undstand where you're coming from, I feel the same way sometimes. Nicely written too, I really enjoy your writting.
-Hope