Extraordinary

Dedicated to a special lady and to all the women that make a Good impact on our lives

You're Extraordinary
Like a rose bud that blooms;
Suddenly over night
unseen under the moon
as we sleep till dawn's light.

You're extraordinary
Like the way a caterpillar
can change into a chrysalis
then emerge a little later,
as a butterfly flying in bliss.

You're extraordinary
like the sunset as seen on the sea shore;
with its golden crest slowly sinking,
golden brown like your eyes' allure
and like your smile breathtaking.

You're extraordinary
like the way God created the universe
within six days with all His mighty glory;
and he's given me such a blessing,
to know you... An extraordinary Lady

Reviews

[Li Li]

This was very heartfelt. Seems like we have a very lucky lady out there some where. You put words together in a definition that is so loving. You truly expose your heart and analyze the things that surround you to finalize her. Which, is very appropriate.

Your use of words is wonderful. Free forming, yet very thought out. Nothing that I could see that needed change.

Bless!
~Li Li

[emmajoy]

A true declaration of love, for sure, and, worded with a pen dipped in magic. Each verse has a special touch, a special comparison... so warm and touching. Plus, your format and meter is truly fine.

'You're extraordinary
like the sunset as seen on the sea shore;
with its golden crest slowly sinking,
golden brown like your eyes' allure
and like your smile breathtaking.'

Thank you for sharing.

[Michael X]

pure romance my friend- and I don't know what woman would'nt love the adoration you've expressed
with specifics that draws reason into the idea.. making this poem complete in form-- rhyme form
that encapsulates the affectionate intent, the full circle admiration- passionate and metaphorically
charged- colorful- there're many emotions that can be pondered in light of the heartfelt meaning
a beautiful tribute those beautiful women who make life complete..thanks for sharing


You're extraordinary
like the sunset as seen on the sea shore;
with its golden crest slowly sinking,
golden brown like your eyes' allure
and like your smile breathtaking

[Jessi]

This is so beautiful!!! My heart was warmed by this peice. If only I could find a man to see me like that. WONDERFUL I love it