SeDuCeD.....

A Poem by Yellow Butterfly

Acrostic

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~Sensual touches from his hands caressing her body~

~Exciting her senses she becomes powerless~

~Delirious convulsions overtake her whole being~

~Undulation in her spine about to let go~

~Crescendo as they light up the dark skies~

~Euphoric feeling showering his seed of satisfaction~

~Deliciousness so tasty neither of them can deny ~

© 2021 Yellow Butterfly

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The Rock And Roll Cowbo..

This is one of the hardest poes to write but you did an impresive job

Posted 4 Years Ago

Hotwater

That pen of yours is on the verge of melting!... hot stuff!
*bird*

Posted 12 Years Ago

The way you write it, i can feel the impending release in her as she becomes overwhelmed by him. The C is my favourite line, although it is all very sensual and well done and fits together so nicely.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Jibey

Lovely image and words to match...Clever use of 'seduced' - and a great sense of building climax... 'seed of satisfaction' simply describes the cumming and the association of shower and of tasty adds to the feeling that this was a good one...

Let's do it! :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago

quinfinn

okay, this is superbly sensual and slurpalicious....i am gonna have a huge water bill this month if you keep writing poems like this one. i wonder how many cold showers i can stand. very, very nice!

Posted 12 Years Ago

12 Years Ago

Oh my darling Quin..... you really do make me laugh.... but I'm not laughing at you my new friend..... read more

12 Years Ago

always a pleasure.....

Buddhistboy73

Yeah YB, you're on fire here...! V inspiring and erotic write..:) Like the wordplay too..:)
Each line is great, but my favourite was:

"Euphoric feeling showering his seed of satisfaction".....
fantastic imagery here...:)
BB

Posted 12 Years Ago

12 Years Ago

Thanks BB...... I think I've been seizing the moment today... and just letting my pen's imagination .. read more

Frieda P

OMG girl, did you take a viagra today or what?! This one's really delicious with a capital D...love it! Calm down, you're gonna give yourself a coronary today. ;-)