Light Offerings.....

Senryu "In the right light, at the right time, everything is extraordinary." ~Aaron Rose

 

When night times beckon

 

You help dispel the darkness

 

and light up my mind

 

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

And let me offer you my sincere regards for your writes...:)

[Buddhistboy73]

Wow! The only words that do this poem justice. Really.

Candles have been used for centuries to light dark places, and for things such as meditation/massage......good use of props here..:)
Loved this piece., so deep on so many levels...
Glad the light was what the poem ended on...:)

BB

[Tree]

Just three lines/ but you illuminate. And it's just plain true. That a special person can push away darkness and negativity. They fill your life with a very real energy. A cool piece, YB

Diego

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you Diego :O)

[Frieda P]

Lovely thought, I light a candle for my sister every night.

I tripped over 'nighttimes'...perhaps when night time beckons. I love it nonetheless.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thanks Fp.... typo corrected.... :O)

[Jibey]

A nice thought... with light comes also warmth :-)

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you Jibey.... ;O)