Entangled Love......

Allow me to free you from your shackled soul

So I can heal the marks etched on your heart

Release you from your tornado of sadness

Let me save you from your sea of sorrow

breathe life back into your sunken lungs

 freeing you from your chained up life

As I place my hand on your chest

I can hear you loud and clear

Your heart beating is shallow

Your breathing is laboured

From my intrusive touch

You’re starting to believe

You hold me so tightly

Our emotions don’t lie

Believe when I say

I promise to take

away your pain

spiraling out of

your  control 

Let me in for

I have found

the missing

link to

your

♥

 

Reviews

[Clive D Costa]

MY GOD! my time now is calamity and this is what saved me from madness!

[Wondering Mind]

almost tantric (I say "almost" in order to avoid "assumption")..
and how did you do that "heart"?...nice shape poetry too

[VelvetRosetta]

Wanting to take the pain away from someone you care for...I have been there. Sensitive yet passionate.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Hello VelvetRosetta, thank you so much for reading and reviewing my work today... really appreciate it... :O)

[VelvetRosetta]

You are welcome!

[The 13th Eros]

So powerful emotionally, sensually, and visually. You create a world of love and healing and freedom... the deepest love one can give another.

[Yellow Butterfly]

I am honoured to have you grace my pages... and adore your wonderful reviews... thank you kindly Eros.. ;o0

[David Scott]

I enjoyed this "spirraling" poetry. Oh if we could trust that one does indeed have the "missing link to your Heart". Alovely thought and a well crafted write.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Hi David, I'm glad you enjoyed this one...... we have to believe the one out their does indeed..... :O)

[Dr. Wood ?]

Faultless..just as Robbie said.....quite wonderful Yellow...perfect

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you for your lovely words.... and stopping by... :O)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is sheer Perfection!...such glorious comfort in your words Lady Butterfly, so heartfelt!~xo~

[Yellow Butterfly]

Awwwh thanks Robbie.... :O)

[Sir Joe]

I agree that eroticism is sometimes a man's resort to relieve some emotional pain. I even think that it's his best resort. LOL

By ending the poem that way, you were able to shout out that the sexual act is not always about lust, sometimes it also involves love and affection. The act is oftentimes just an overflow of love. I love how you visually presented the poem. I think you are trying to point out that the things that the speaker successively does all sum up to easing the pain felt by the person being caressed by the speaker.

Just a thought: I think the word "breath" in the fifth line should be "breathe". It's supposed to be a verb, right? "breath" is a noun.

Thank you so much for sharing this piece. =)


- sir joe

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thanks Sir Joe..... thank you for your kind words..... and your little help with the proof reading..... :O)

[Sir Joe]

You're welcome. =)

[Frieda P]

Those first two lines really drew me in, we all want someone who will help heal our scars, very lovely....where is this poem pointing to by the way, just saying. ;-)

Tripped over a couple of yours, one is a typo
'Your' starting to believe, should be you're

Still much enjoyed this one YB...very cool pic too!

[Yellow Butterfly]

hahaha I'd say pointing down to the review boxes but that would be to obvious an answer... lol oops their I go with my Pfffft abbreviations...

Thanks for the typo heads up.... now amended.... proof reading is the bane of my life... :O)

[Frieda P]

No problem, apostrophe's in my Achilles heel, jacob usually catches mine! Hahaha, pointing to review boxes, okay if you say so! ;-)

[Yellow Butterfly]

Haahaha I say so.... but I'm guessing you don' believe so....... :0)

[Frieda P]

Hardly but it's your poem and you can tell a fib if you must! hahaha ;-P

[Leigh]

Strong writing and image, I like the tapered text too

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thanks leighgreen :O)