Fire & Ice....

Music artist Within Temptation Song "Fire & Ice"

Abstracted embrace

 face to face

Consumed by pain

going crazy insane

Feelings so real

needing to heal

A broken heart

torn wide apart

Two forces of nature

searching a future

Cannot hide

emotions riptide

Torched soul

consumed whole

Engulfed in fires

doused in desires

Flamed all blue

a desirable hue

Passion fueled red

from words said

Ignorance is bliss

sealed with a kiss

Intensity of heat

hearts skip a beat

Restless needs

Passions feeds

Hunger and lust

about to combust

Together they unite

as souls ignite

Inflamed in dignity

now to eternity

Author's Note

Reviews

[Clive D Costa]

This reminded me of my poetry and rhyme scheme. no offense but thats pretty good.

[Pax]

i envision a great imagery here.... the passion burns in your writes makes this poem a stunning read. Intense!

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you for your kind review Pax...

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I envision a torrid love affair written in the flames of lust and passion... The music accompanying this write created an intense emotion... Magnetic, Bravo!

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thanks Robbie :O)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

My pleasure. ~xo~:)

[Sam Gregory]

This is really nice, great imagery. A lot of very quotable phrases used. Would sound good to the instrumental me thinks :)

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you for stopping by and your kind review :O)

[Sam Gregory]

No problem :)

[BL]

Very nice YB and very erotic

[Yellow Butterfly]

Cheers Bluely...

[BL]

:-)

[Frieda P]

Oh wow, I want to be inflamed in dignity now! Hot one, love that pic...you wrote it well, some really lovely phrases here, I can't pick one since I love the entire work! Love the title too.... Nicely pen'd YB.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you Fp.... much appreciated. :O)

[Frieda P]

You know I've seen that pic somewhere before, you beat me to it! ;-) You did an outstanding job & my pleasure always. :-)

[Yellow Butterfly]

Hey, I have a great picture to send you.... on it's way.... :O)

[Frieda P]

You're not going to write it?

[Yellow Butterfly]

Not now... :O)