Beautiful Heartache...

Senryū

Longing for your touch,

all I feel right now is my

beautiful heartache

 

Reviews

[BL]

This one really reaches out with those deep rich crimson red pouring through. This is tasteful and so erotic too

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Well done... it grabs at the heart, much like her hand holding the rose in the lovely pic above.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thanking you for stopping by.... much appreciated.

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Its been a pleasure.

[LaVonneTheLovely]

beautiful haiku :)

[quinfinn]

this is beautifully composed, YB....i love when you wax senryu!

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thanks Quin.... hope all is well :O)

[Sami Khalil]

I love it...:)

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you dear poet.... :O)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[Frieda P]

What a gorgeous Senryu, so much emotion is so few words, just lovely YB.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Love your words too Fp..... thank you :O)