All the leaves are brown...

~Haiku~

Natures changing force

Summer but a distant dream

All the leaves are brown

Author's Note

Reviews

[redflutterby]

As soon as I saw the title of this poem "California Dreaming" came to mind. One of my favorite songs. This is a wonderful haiku!!

[Yellow Butterfly]

Awwh... Thank you.... it's mine too..

Thanks again... :O)

[ANTO]

Summer already seems like a distant memory here.
I love the golden hue of the word 'Summer' in among the brown - it looks like one of those gorgeous leaves that have their last remains of colour, nestled in among the long-ago-fallen dead brown leaves.

A very Autumnal/Fall write YB
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[Yellow Butterfly]

Now Autumn is soon to become a distant memory as Winter kicks...

Thanks Anto.... (missing your presence on here)

[David Wesley]

Phases of life.. changes of the season.. so much in 17 syllables.. hehe.

I think you have a special attachment to the haiku.. it fits you well.

[Yellow Butterfly]

I do D.W.A..... favourite time of the year :O)

[Kelly Scheppers]

Isn't autumn the lovliest season for poets? There's just something about the leaves as they crunch...like crusts of snow in the winter.

A beautiful Haiku!

[Yellow Butterfly]

It sure is... and soon over too since writing this... thank you for stopping by Kelly :O)

[Butch Decatoria]

Great haiku. Thanks for sharing.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank You PF :o)

[J. Kell]

Genius! Haikus are such a challenge but you made it look easy. Love the song, great musical taste you have :). It fit perfectly.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thanks Justink ( or is that Justin k) :O) for your kind words...:O))) I love all seasons and partial to all kinds of music... this ones a classic... who wouldn't like this one.. (well... each to there own I guess...hahaha)

[J. Kell]

lol. True true.

[Eddie Phillips]

A simple but poignant haiku. Seasons change..

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you Eddie... autumn is definitely upon us... :O)))

[Relic]

Excellent haiku and song. You've captured the essence of both.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you so much Relic... nice of you to pass by and leave a lovely review much appreciated :O)

[Relic]

My pleasure.

[Yellow Butterfly]

:O))))))))

[Relic]

:)))))))))

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

A perfect haiku... well done!

[Yellow Butterfly]

I am humbled by your presence as always.. thank you for your kind words PH :O)

[Sami Khalil]

You do it best and brightest...Splendid indeed...:)

[Yellow Butterfly]

Awwh thanks Sami.. you say the most nicest words. :O)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)