Strip Me Bare......

Senryū

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I am of colour

 

 Strip me bare reveal my soul

 

 I bruise easily

 

 

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Author's Note

Reviews

[Leigh]

Beautiful image and thoughts

[Echoes of Eros]

Everything here is brilliant. The living image, Natasha's song, and your profoundly revealing confession. Love this. xo

[Tom]

Just like every butterfly, beautiful but handle delicately!

[Sami Khalil]

Lightening and thunder in this powerful write...Bravo

[Frieda P]

Wow this is like a thunderbolt YB, it's so good I'll let you slide with the extra syllable at the end there...seriously Wow, so much in a tiny Senryu.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Awwh thank you so much Fp..... :O))

[Frieda P]

Ditch the 'that' and use 'bruising' instead, just a suggestion :-) Great one...love the music too!

[Yellow Butterfly]

The song title was more fitting.... thanks again Fp :O)