Addiction

This poem is about how someone in my life was like a drug. He was the addiction and i was the addicted

Addiction

You are my addiction.

You are everything i need in life,

and more.

When your not around i die,

i suffer without you.

I need you so bad i push everyone away just get another taste

I needed you then i need you now i need you forever

being without you is like being without oxygen

i feel so lonely and lost without you

I start to ask myself how much am i willing to give up for you?

every answer is the same i always say

"i would give up everything for you"

and that's the way it'll stay

Author's Note

This was a very emotional poem for me when i wrote it and i thank my friends for helping me be able to express my feelings. Poetry is the outlet for us to say in public what is known in privet

Reviews

[Lala]

I could feel the intensity of your feelings through these words. It can be difficult to translate thoughts into a poem, but you've done a good job!

[NhanHoang]

Nice!! I like how you used Oxygen as an example of love.