Simple

Simple

 

The clouds that drift though the air,

An empty room with a single chair,

A checkered pattern with red and black squares,

A darkened hallway with echoey stairs.

A dotted line with a single dot,

A short story without a plot,

A single fact you forgot,

A single car in an empty lot.

A lost emotion,

A strange devotion,

A single ingredient to a potion,

Motionless waves in an ocean.

How could something so simple

 

Be so hard to comprehend.

Reviews

[katnisscat]

[Maddi Snowden]

Love it! I think its fun to read and it's great.

[PoetryPenPal]

Thank you so much:-)

[CMPurrett]

I love this poem! Well done.

[PoetryPenPal]

Thank you so much!

[LadyAnn68]

This is tremendous! the way you made it so strong and yet SIMPLE!

[PoetryPenPal]

Haha. Nice play on words. Thank you so much.

[LadyAnn68]

There in lies the talent!

[Maddy]

This poem is true to it's name, simple but yet a great read. Loved this one!

[PoetryPenPal]

Thank you so much Maddy.

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is lovely my little poetry penpal.People should understand the little things :)

[PoetryPenPal]

Thank you so much!

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are so welcome :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the way you led the reader to common sense. The simple acts and the beauty before us should not be so difficult to understand. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[PoetryPenPal]

Thanks a bunch Coyote.

[Praveeta]

Wonderful write dear friend.

[PoetryPenPal]

Thanks pal.

[Praveeta]

You are welcome Poetry Penpal.

[Sami Khalil]

I like this write alot... You are talented...:)..........................

[PoetryPenPal]

Thanks friend!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..................

[icelandicblue]

You ask a fantastic question and I loved how these lines flowed:

A dotted line with a single dot,
A short story without a plot,
A single fact you forgot,
A single car in an empty lot.

Those are stellar lines!

[PoetryPenPal]

Thanks a lot. I like those lines too.

[LadyAnn68]

There in lies the talent!

[PoetryPenPal]

Thanks again! :-)