Haiku

 

Feel the cold wind blow.

The breeze blows gently, calmly.

On that, warm autumn day.

Author's Note

what do you think?
how can i fix it?

Reviews

[Jeannine Winklaar]

You are mentioning blow-blows twice. try to find another word. And gently and calmly are also almost the same.
The last sentence is too long for a Haiku.
Good luck.